During my media lesson on wendesday we had a feedback lesson. During this we looked at out peers work and suggested improvments to ensure that it was meeting the genre they had set out to begin with. This is what my peers looked on that lesson:
This is my front cover, as you can see a lot has been done so far.
This is my contents page, i havent really started this so therfore it is difficult to suggest improvments for it.
This is the feedback i recieved, it says that they feel my magazine is for young peoel between 8-12 year olds based on the front cover, due to the bunny rabbit. The feedbakc also said that they feel the genre of my magazine is pop which it is.
Another peice of feedback i recived was that they thought my target market was for 13-16 year old girls, some which is different from the comment aboive, therfore the age group needs to be defined better in my cover. The ffedback also said that i need more images and text for it to come across as a pop magazine. I plan on acting upon this feedback to improve my magazine.
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